Detective Bob started to pack his bag! He left on Friday, he had said goodbye to his wife and his children then set out [Dad's note : Madeleine decided that Detective Bob's wife being murdered too gruesome]. His crew of detectives were waiting for him by the office. Bob's friend, Peter, was a well known detective. He had seen many crimes and knew what to do. Peter would tell Bob stories of what he had done. Not all of them were nice, but Bob had gotten used to them.
Bob stopped and gasped. Blood, everywhere ..... and a huge lake. "What can we do?" trembled Bob.
"Never fear Peter is here!" cried Peter. "I can call my good old friend, Tumnes, he is sure to bring us a boat!" cried Peter.
Ten minutes later. "Ahhhh, here he comes now with a nice big boat." said Peter. "See, you can always count on MY friends can't you?"
"Yes, yes, now let's get on board this ship!" shouted Bob.
"All aboard!" yelled Bob and they began.
The sea was very, very, very, cold. One day Alex screamed and pointed out the biggest monster. It was twice the size of the ship! Alex did a stupid thing of diving in the water. Unfortunately he got eaten.
Bob, expecting to hear Peter cry "Do not fear Peter is hear" but instead he heard a splash and a scream. Peter had been eaten too!
"I know what to do!" yelled Max.
"Get the meat of four cows and three pigs and one horse and put them in the cannon and fire out as far as you can he will follow it!" cried Max.
Two minutes later, "Have you go the meat?" asked Max.
"Yes," said Tom.
"Good, now fire!!!" roared Max.
"It worked, the beast is gone!" cried Bob.
"Land ho!" yelled Tom.
"Max you are a hero!!!" Tom, Bob and everyone shouted.
The story continues.